This section demonstrates the painfully obtuse prose which some critics dislike in Melville. Yet, every tedious detail here and elsewhere in Billy Budd leads to a fuller understanding of the plot. In the early chapters, Melville explains current events and foreshadows those to come. Because the spirit of mutiny is in the air, the conscientious and dedicated captain, while dealing with the affairs aboard his ship, keeps himself alert to possible rebellion.
Melville not only gives an accolade to Nelson, whom he obviously admires, but at the same time prepares for an eventual comparison of this great naval commander with Vere, the captain of the Bellipotent. Like Nelson, Captain Vere does not seek personal glory. Also like Nelson, Vere is a thoroughly trained professional. Melville creates the plot of the novel and the destinies of the characters against this emotion-charged historical setting.
